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Old 04/29/07, 09:38 pm
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You can't critique this.

Let's try some freehand pub rock.

I Cry on the Inside

(Relaxing acoustics)

Pack of cigarettes on the table
Six pack of beers by my side
Living life through a cable
Just a power surge along for the ride

(Something messy, distorted, possibly wailing)

It's all for the money
Now don't that sound funny
Music just ain't what it used to be
What happened to rock?
Now we got all these cocks
Bleeding their hearts out to me

(Heavy riff)

Don't play this song on the radio
I won't give a fuck if you do
There's no room for apathy on the radio
If you don't blow there's no money for you

(Slow down into acoustics)

Now it's all for the money
But not for me honey
I got what I need right here
Double bourbon and coke
With a sidedish of smoke
Chasing it down with a beer

But the pub style is fading
Pop hop has come wading
Through it's own festering crap
It's so degrading
But I can't stand rock fading
To give way to the MTV crap


First time I've freehanded...or even written ffs...in 3years...and I still bitch and moan. Now THAT's style.
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Old 05/03/07, 12:08 pm
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